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yh1029:只要读起来通顺,就是好诗!!!。。。 (2019-09-18 20:15)
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clgmczk:第3句话最后一字改下,平平仄平 (2019-09-18 15:08)
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stt2008:好诗,楼主什么时候才能团聚啊 (2019-09-17 08:28)
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至尊狼王:中秋没办法回家就国庆吧。。反正也不远了 (2019-09-15 00:05)
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